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haha wow

I shit my pants at :29. Great track, man.

1:37... Huge.

Pissed my pants a bit at 1:37 ;)

Good work. Boost the bass that's underlying the drops, and it'll be even bigger.

mr-jazzman responds:

Yep, already got the memo, thanks! =)

voodoo people ftw

Enjoyed the transition to dubstep! Feels like this has trance, dnb, and dubstep all in one!

mr-jazzman responds:

Well, that's the general idea lol. Glad you liked it man!

this kicks ass.

definitely has a grimy evol intent feel to it. if i still did animation n' shit, i'd totally make a video for it.

OK.

First off, I do like this, but...

You don't need to slam the keys every time you hit them. I think a more gentle approach to hitting the keys (especially in the higher octaves... oww... headache) would provide some depth.

Also, it's pretty obvious here and there that you got "finger-tied" on several occasions. If you just went in and fixed that, along with altering the velocity on some of the notes (I assume you're using a midi keyboard, so this would be feasible) it would be way better.

Overall, enjoyable.

Acid-Paradox responds:

The only thing that i fixed was some wrong keys that i hit accidentally, I don't know what you mean with "finger-tied" but i will try to figure that out.

Thanks For The Review!!!

Ruben-Acid Paradox-

fantastic!

this is by far my favorite track on newgrounds. good fucking job dude.

coooool

you didn't tell me you uploaded a new song :3

awesome. my favorite part was when i clicked the evony ad.\ <3

cooooool

found myself head-bobbing to this. good shit. 5/5, 10/10

Hmm...

In the future, I would pick something a little less good to remix/cover. The original is better and you've mastered it the same way Paragon did, but his was way more driven and exciting. The violin solo was pretty cool though... Needs a better transition, methinks.

For example, my shit is terrible, try remixing that and making it way better. Choosing to cover shitty songs or songs of a different genre than what you're used to would be a bigger challenge and probably more interesting to do.

Acid-Paradox responds:

What?

i Didn't understand :(

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Good shit, mang.

Only thing that I can say that might improve this is some shit to fill up the off-beats (i.e. something a bit more than the hat)... Might give it a more full sound, or might take away from the driving synth/bass melody. 10/10, 5/5, favorited. GG.

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