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Hmm.

For freehanding, it's not too bad. However, for rigid structures built on rigid frameworks (i.e. this house and the hundreds of smaller boxes within it), you probably should have used a straight-edge, if not a ruler.

It's good and very intricate, however you may want to work on line-weight and your use of blending. Take your time and your work will come out better.

DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Oh yeah, I totally understood why she gave me a B..... I could never be an architect. I have no patience! lol

Cool, but...

"But...don't expect that Tom will change his logo...cuz I love the Tank too much <3"

I don't think anyone's expecting him to change the logo, especially not to this.

On a more helpful note, you should have done something more with the negative space, as this logo redesign has a lot of it. Seems very empty and has that early 2000s feel to it, do you know what I mean?

I think this would work better as a base rather than a finished design.

JakBaronKing responds:

Of course he won't change it. I was being sarcastic.

It was after all...just a homework assignment.

I like you, you're cute. :-)

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